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    City-2

    by Doug » Wed Dec 31, 2014 12:50 pm

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    Re: City-2

    by Mattyp » Tue Jan 06, 2015 3:22 pm

    I like both of these, but think I'm leaning to the 2nd. 4 very different buildings but somehow you put it all together and made it work. you have a good eye for these shots, its something i struggle with myself.
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    Re: City-2

    by Doug » Tue Jan 06, 2015 6:09 pm

    Thanks Mattp

    Yer that second one is a bit of a hotchpotch of angles, surfaces, styles, light and shade.
    I liked it, was not sure if I would be the only one. :)

    Maybe its my liking of technical drawing at school and the use of CAD at work, that draws my eye to geometric form.
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    Re: City-2

    by Plays with Light » Sat Feb 14, 2015 3:59 pm

    The first one is perfectly timed to get that rat-with-wings there! A nice strong composition and good contrasts, interest, etc... too.
    Feedback and honest, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
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    Re: City-2

    by Doug » Sat Feb 14, 2015 4:39 pm

    Plays with Light wrote:The first one is perfectly timed to get that rat-with-wings there! A nice strong composition and good contrasts, interest, etc... too.


    Thanks Alex
    To be honest I did not even see the bird in the view finder.
    There was a moment in post where I toyed with a simple spot removal to take it from the intended study of form, but it really high lights the stark environments we make for our selves at times.

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