Thanks for the comments guys.
BP after looking at the photos on the comp I realized my lighting was set to high, when you say move light to right I assume (hope) you mean bring it around towards the front of the model
I was using a white reflector, perhaps it wasn't close enough or I wasn't using enough power.
At the moment I only have the 1 light and an SB800. I just need to get a short male to male PC sync cord so that I can use both of my ebay flash triggers then I will have 2 lights and I have 2 shoot through brollies (1big, 1 small) and 2 5in1 reflectors (1 large & 1 small).
So looks like with the next sitting I set my light lower & closer.
Thanks again guys