Remorhaz wrote:Sam - #2 for me. There's a small patch of bright area just near the lower hand and I'm not 100% sure about the top of the step being at neck level - I love that textured oof area at the top but it could have been maybe 1 or 2 steps lower (model 1 or 2 steps higher)?
heartyfisher wrote:#2 for me too .. really very nice!
Re the step.. I think its perfect where it is.. the top of the stairs line up with the lips and draws attention to her very nice lips. really like the background too.. the top bit with the soft homogenous mushiness contrast swell with the pattern of the steps as the lines get harder and harder the lower it goes. Very nice !
PS .. maybe try a bit of "transform/perspective" to level the bottom stairs.
PPS .. also the skin on the hands seem a bit too rough in contrast to the rest of her smooth face and torso..
PPPS : really like the colour tones of the background matching her hair and skin.
Busiboy wrote:Your work has improved in leaps and bounds since you first started here.
I love all three shots, I picked the highlight as well, you've used the jacket and body as a scrim for the rest of teh shot, just that small patch stands out, its no big issue but it is noticable.
The first one is very nicely done
The last is very nice as well, what lens did you use for that one? Did you mess with the Bokeh or is that out of the camera?
The 2nd one has the best connection for me, with the expression in the first and last not as strong.
To chance my hand at the interpretive side, I stand to be corrected and no doubt someone will, for me you have a great model, a technically correct exposed framed shot. But they are of a pretty girl at a location, not of something, not sure if you want to push that envelope, but this is why I find myself drifting away from glamour and fashion stuff, with my head full of work and baby stuff I just don't seem to have time to be creative these days to come up with a model, location and scene/setting to justify the effort.
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest